Language
This story has good language which impressed me. Besides, she also uses some figurative language so show her language power such as “tears fell down from her eyes like river”. This shows that she use her language to show the tone and mood of the story.
Style
Her style of writing is simple but it manages to attract the reader. The story explains very well about the setting around her to gives the reader feel her situation. That style is well shown in her story.
Plausibility/ suspension of disbelief
The setting of the story and character is logic. This is because the story explains a struggle of a girl in her marriage life. Besides she includes the conflict between the protagonist and the mother in law.
However, some descriptions are not logic; for example, there are tiles in wooden room. So she must be careful during giving her description about her setting.
Quality of writing
Overall good, but must avoid some specific description about the setting in the story. For example “there were spider webs around the bed”. I feel this should avoid because it giving a image some old of house where there is no human being.
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